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Whaddya want by renardchaton Whaddya want by renardchaton
a little doodle that turned into a full-size kemono thingamabob
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I took a lot of screenshots. I guess it was because I actually liked how it looked...


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:iconneoconvoy:
Neoconvoy Jun 21, 2012  Student General Artist
I like the shading!
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:iconkerixai:
Your colouring just keeps getting better! Would you like some critique from me?
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:iconrenardchaton:
renardchaton Jun 20, 2012  Student Digital Artist
yes sure go ahead
haha i'm scared
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:iconkerixai:
haha I know the feeling. Critiques are so useful but it's never nice to have flaws pointed out :noes: disclaimer: my crits aren't always entirely accurate :P also when I say right/left it means ours, not hers
The right hand/wrist looks a little small compared to the left, and what the fingers are doing looks a little confused- are they bending or not? the shading at the boundary between the crotch and the stomach should be more graduated as the shape should go inwards more smoothly/it's rounder rather than two flat edges facing different directions. The feet should be flatter on the ground to be able to support her, since they are also so close together (not a very wide base). Finally, the right ear looks like it is coming out of the back rather than the side of the head because of it's placement and the amount of hair in front of it/lack of hair behind it that should be visible since she's turned a bit to the left.
Well that's all I can think of!
Buuuut the colouring in the hair is beautiful and I think you got the poof of the tail on the ground spot on, I really want to touch it xD
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:iconrenardchaton:
renardchaton Jun 21, 2012  Student Digital Artist
fffff i thought about all these things (except the wrist/hand thing, which I noticed after posting ughhh), but I was scared of changing it and making it look worse!!
but thank you, your critique is super accurate!!
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:iconkerixai:
I also worry about making it worse when I spot a mistake- usually I make a new layer and use layer masks so anything I do can be easily undone if I decide it looked better the way it was. But it is so irritating when you only realise once you've practically finished and then it takes such a long time to change any thing by that stage! :shakefish: you're very welcome :hug:
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Wild-Wolf-Lilly Jun 12, 2012  Student General Artist
this looks great <3333

i love the colors ;;u;; <33
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:iconrenardchaton:
renardchaton Jun 13, 2012  Student Digital Artist
thanks, Lilly : D
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Wild-Wolf-Lilly Jun 13, 2012  Student General Artist
no problem <3
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Zarcoal Jun 11, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Very cute! ^^
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